范例8.2 原文

Dear Visa Officer ,

My visa application was refused again last week and I should say that the visa officer gave me a very patient interview and listened to my statement very carefully. However, he still concluded that he believes that I will not come back after the completion of my Master’s degree in computer science in your country.

While I respect visa officer’s job to prevent under-qualified people from entering the United States, I strongly believe that there must be a misunderstanding between the visa officer and my own personal plan. I do can prove that the visa officer’s opinion that I will not come back is wrong and believe that you will give me a fair reassessment.

As a computer specialist in Beijing, I was offered a job several times by such big US companies as IBM and Microsoft. I can easily get a position in any major international computer corporation and make a very good salary (it’s very common for many of my college pals to make more than 8,000 RMB a month).

The reason that I did not take any job outside of ABC University’s Computer Center for higher pay is just because of two things.

I had a contract with ABC University that effected for five years. I did not want to breach this contract. I want to start my career in China’s computer industry at a higher level by obtaining an advanced degree from the United States, the world’s leading force in computer production and research.

Please think that if a computer professional can make that much money now working for an international computer company in Beijing, how much money I could possibly earn after returning from America with a shining Master’s degree! And please think that how much privilege I would have at that time in my own country in addition to the money I could make?

Every major computer company in YOUR country, the United States of America, is coming to China by large scale. Their operation is expanding, their investment is going up and their market share is growing in my country. I would be stupid not coming back to cut a piece of China’s computer cake after I receive a much cherished Master’s degree from America. For money, for career, and for social status, I will be choosing nowhere but my homeland, China.

I sincerely hope that your visa officer take this fact into the consideration for my visa application. Your reasonable and fair reassessment is greatly appreciated.

Sincerely,